Ahri

I agree with what Hethalos said <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="21" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="574" title="I am a dummy!"/>
Nicely done, really ^^ For tips, her jawline is too squareish and masculine, the top of head too flat, the chin too large (tall), her middle finger's base looks a bit weird (I suppose it's the pointer making it look like that but not clear), and her chest/boobies could use a bit more shadowing towards the dark side, her shoulders (our right side one especially) too sharp. She could also be blended more into the background/atmosphere using misty soft brushes above the painting layer <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>

This silly technique things aside, I think you captured a feeling that's way harder to learn how to capture on canvas than any technical stuff, so yay! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="21" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="574" title="I am a dummy!"/> Considering your age, I would give my 2cents that you're doing AWESOME and you have an innate talent to pictures feeling and atmosphere. From now on it's just silly technique and anatomy to learn and you're set ^_^